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roman ([info]roman) wrote,
@ 2007-10-03 00:16:00

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Havoc of the Opera -- The Music of the Night
Chapter 25 -- The Music of the Night


There was a moment of chaos, and Harry blinked away from Ron. This sequence hadn't been thoroughly rehearsed. Everyone appeared to take their assigned positions with relative ease, Harry dodging Ron's overcoat, which flew backstage over Dean's head. The Overture blared its final notes. It was almost time to come in.

'This trophy from our saviours, from the enslaving force of Rome!' Pansy, or rather, Carlotta, or rather, Elissa, Queen of Carthage, took the spotlight, smiling in delight at Hermione and Ginny, who played her two leading slave girls. In the wings, just behind Harry, Lavender grimaced at the hideous severed head that Pansy carried. Because Ron had terminantly refused to allow a shrieking, bleeding head in a muggle production, the twins had decided to make it as realistic as possible. Harry thought that it bore a remarkable resemblance to Dolores Umbridge.

Parvati, Crabbe, and a great deal of people stepped onstage, pretending to be members of the crew working on the Hannibal set. From the wings, their chorus sang along with Carlotta.

'Hear the drums – Hannibal comes!' It was Neville’s cue.

He silently recommended his soul to Merlin and began, with an extremely exaggerated Italian accent, 'Sad to return to find the land we love threatened once more by Roma’s far-reaching grasp.'

To his right, there was a loud groan, and Ron emerged from a "rehearsing" group. 'Signor… if you please: "Rome". We say "Rome", not "Roma."' He turned his back to Neville momentarily to eye the audience with an aghast expression. His charmingly dishevelled looks, coupled with his half-open shirt and the rolled-up sleeves, drew more than one sigh from the girls in the audience.

'Si, si, Rome, not Roma. It’s very hard for me,' Neville stammered, murmuring to himself, 'Rome… Rome…'

Harry’s breath caught. It was his turn. He exchanged glances with Seamus and both followed Nott onstage, to be introduced to the crew.

'Gentlemen, please!' McGonagall snapped, banging a cane inches from Seamus’ feet. 'If you would kindly move to one side?'

'Madame Giry, our ballet mistress,' Nott grimaced. 'I don’t mind confessing, M. Firmin, I shan’t be sorry to be rid of the whole blessed business.'

'I keep asking you, Monsieur, why exactly are you retiring?' Harry had to force himself not to try and spot the reason lurking from the wings. Where was he?

Nott ignored the question. 'We take particular pride here in the excellence of our ballets.' Ginny stepped downstage, whirling through the dancers. 'Meg Giry. Mme. Giry’s daughter. Promising dancer, M. André, most promising.'

Hermione then took the spotlight, promptly falling out of step, and eliciting another snap from McGonagall. 'You! Christine Daaé! Concentrate, girl!'

Just as Carlotta sang Think of Me, a backdrop crashed ominously to the floor, hiding Hermione from sight. 'He’s here, the Phantom of the Opera… he is with us-- It’s the ghost…' Ginny and the chorus sang darkly.

Neville glared at Ginny and ran to Pansy. 'You idiots! Cara! Cara! Are you hurt?'

Dean, or rather, Buquet, the stagehand, holding a noose-like length of rope, claimed that it was not his fault, that he wasn’t even at his post, and if there was anyone there, then Messieurs, it must have been a ghost…

'He’s here, the Phantom of the Opera…' Ginny echoed. This time, it was Seamus who glared at her.

'Good heavens! Will you show a little courtesy?'

'Mademoiselle, please!' Harry added.

'These things do happen,' Seamus continued. Pansy turned on him.

'Si! These ‘tings’ do ‘appen! Well, until you stop these ‘tings’ happening, this ‘ting’ does not ‘appen! Ubaldo! Andiamo!'

Neville followed her obediently, muttering, 'Amateurs.'

'I don’t think there’s much more to assist you, gentlemen. Good luck. If you need me, I shall be in Frankfurt.' Nott swiftly excused himself.

Harry couldn’t let his mind drift. Firmin should be a nervous wreck during Hermione's upcoming Think of Me. 'André, this is doing nothing for my nerves.'

Everything was carefully set for Hermione to change discreetly into a gala gown mid-song, symbolising the passage from rehearsals to performance. It was the first 'real' number, and she was extremely nervous. Much to her delight, when she finished, the 'Bravos!' came not only from the characters, but also from the real audience. Ron granted her Reyer’s stiff appraisal.

'Yes, you did well. He will be pleased,' Mme. Giry said. 'And you! You were a disgrace tonight! Here – we rehearse. Now!' She pointed her cane at the dancers.

In the wings, Harry's heart had almost stopped with the anticipation of the next line.

'Bravi, bravi, bravissimi…' intoned a deep voice, offstage, across from Harry. Both Hermione, onstage, and Harry, off, jumped out of their skin. Harry looked around spasmodically.

Hermione sat at her dressing table, talking to Ginny. 'Here in this room he calls me softly...'

'Did she enhance her voice, after all?' Seamus asked, but Harry, still squinting at the darkness, didn't hear him.

'Somehow I know he’s always with me… he, the unseen genius…'

Ginny put a hand on her shoulder. 'Christine, you must have been dreaming…'

Hermione glanced away from her, lost in thought. 'Angel of Music! Guide and guardian! Grant to me your glory!'

'Who is this angel? This..'

'Angel of Music! Hide no longer! Secret and strange angel!'

Harry jerked when he felt a jab on his back. It was Ron, glaring at him. 'Some discretion, ok?'

'He’s with me, even now…'

'I'm not onstage.' Harry glowered. 'But you should be,' he gritted out towards Ron's retreating back. 'Git...'

'Your hands are cold…' Ginny crouched beside Hermione.
'All around me…'

'Your face, Christine, it’s white…'

'It frightens me…' Hermione looked up tearfully.

'Don’t be frightened…' Ginny retorted, interrupted by a raging Mme. Giry, who demanded that she joined the others in rehearsal.

Harry hurried through the wings, looking for the bottle of champagne that he had to carry onstage. Seamus was already on his way there.

'What a relief!' Harry swung his long overcoat and raised his eyes to the ceiling. 'Not a single refund!'

'Greedy,' Lavender squeezed his arm. She had a bit part as Firmin's wife.

'Gentlemen, if you wouldn’t mind,' Draco calmly took the champagne from Harry’s hands. 'This is one visit I should prefer to make unaccompanied.'

'They appear to have met before…' Harry commented knowingly, almost bouncing offstage, as Christine and Raoul reunited in her dressing room. As they launched into the Little Lotte sequence, he frantically searched for a good place to observe the next scene.

'Careful, Harry, the floor’s about to move again,' Ginny reminded him.

'I shan’t keep you late!' Malfoy promised, when Hermione refused to have supper with him. The Angel of Music was strict.

'No, Raoul…'

'You must change. I must get my hat. Two minutes – Little Lotte.' He sprinted offstage.

'Things have changed, Raoul,' she said thoughtfully. Harry stood as close as he could to the large mirror that hid the secret passage to the Phantom's lair.

'Insolent boy!' A voice snapped from behind it, but Harry couldn't spot the body to which it belonged, even if he craned his neck until it almost snapped. 'Ignorant fool! This brave young suitor, sharing in my triumph!'

'Angel! I hear you! Speak – I listen…' Hermione pleaded, her eyes roaming the empty room in confusion. 'My soul was weak - forgive me… enter at last, Master!'

'Flattering child, you shall know me,' Her Master's voice took on an amused tone. Harry wondered it the audience had recognised it already. 'Look at your face in the mirror – I am there, inside!'

The lights dimmed around Hermione, and the mirror shone. A dark figure rose behind it. In his hurry to see it more clearly, Harry almost fell onto the stage.

'Angel of Music! Hide no longer! Come to me, strange angel…'

Malfoy returned onstage, extending his hand to the doorknob, freezing upon hearing two voices. When he again tried to open the door, it was locked. 'Whose is that voice…? Who is that in there…?'

Watching from the wings, behind the Phantom, Ron burst with pride at the twins’ work. The mirror slid down, revealing a darkly attired man, behind whom a bright light shimmered. The floor creaked.

'I am your Angel of Music… Come to me, Angel of Music…' the Phantom repeated, grasping Hermione’s wrist. Hermione winced to indicate that the touch was cold, but not forceful. She walked through the mirror, and it slid back into place, just as a puzzled Raoul entered the room.

The lights blacked out around him, and the floor where he stood heaved, making Harry stagger in the wing. The other half of the stage descended to floor level. There, the Phantom and Christine ran hurriedly on and offstage. Mist and candles rose from the floor surrounding them, and the lights took on a blueish hue. A boat came into view and they climbed onto it. Malfoy had already stepped offstage, and that half of it, too, descended, the special effects spreading to it. The first bars of the Phantom's song thundered around them.

The Phantom was clearly visible for the first time. A shiver rippled through Harry’s skin as he mouthed the line. 'My power over you grows stronger yet… And though you turn from me to glance behind…'

Hermione did indeed fidget and look around in doubt.

'The Phantom of the Opera is there, inside your mind…' the Phantom added, looming over Hermione, whose expression softened again.

'... my mind...' she sang along.

Offstage, the chorus added an edge to that peculiar love song. The Phantom approached Christine from behind, and breathed down her neck, never actually touching her. '... you always knew that man and mystery…'

'Were both in you…' Harry murmured.

Answering Seamus' doubts, Hermione finished with a cadenza that her real voice could never have achieved. It was chilling to see her raise her eyes to the ceiling, singing under her Master's command. The audience burst into an unexpected applause. Thankfully, onstage stood the two members of the cast who were least likely to slip out of character.

The Phantom's lair was sliding onstage, and in the ensuing mess, Harry spotted Ron and Malfoy, talking quietly in the far corner of the wing. He made his way towards them with a scowl.

'Well, you know I've got my hands tied, but it's not like I'll stop you... go ahead,' Malfoy said.

'... I'd like to see you try.'

'Hell, kill him, for all I care...'

'Excuse me,' Harry snapped. 'I need a word with you, Ron.'

Ron glared at him. Malfoy turned away to have a look at Hermione, tossing over his shoulder, 'Don't let me get in the way of the lovebirds...'

Ron wanted to retort, but Harry pulled him further back into the wing. 'You glared at me all day. I’ve had enough. Spit it out or look elsewhere.'

'I don’t owe you any explanations on how I look at you,' Ron countered coldly. 'And you might want to lower your voice, there’s a play going on beyond the drapery. Oh, but wait, you'd know that, the boyfriend's there...'

'Are you afraid it's contagious?' Harry snapped. 'That because I fancy him you'll suddenly want to be the Quidditch team's bicycle?'

He regretted his words instantly. He expected a fist to connect with his face at any instant, but Ron simply stared at him.

'Is this his work?' he finally replied. 'Are you turning into him, or are you just thick?'

Onstage, Hermione faced a mirror. Her reflection wore a wedding gown. The image extended its arms through the mirror, towards her, and Christine fainted, amidst shrieks from the youngest in the audience. The Phantom picked her up and carried her tenderly to bed. 'You alone can make my song take flight – help me make the music of the night…'

Harry gazed unblinkingly at the scene. Ron cringed at the words.

'I could have made a worse choice,' Harry mused, still looking at the stage.

Ron eyed him doubtfully, and he focused on the conversation.

'So, is it contagious? Feeling tingly, already?'

'It's got nothing to do with that,' Ron replied evenly.

'Then, what?' Harry snapped in a whisper.

'How long has it been going on?'

Harry shook his head at the change of subject. 'Just… a little over a week ago.' Ron nodded absently. Harry thought that he might as well be completely honest. 'I’ve fancied him for months, though.'

Hermione had managed to peel off the Phantom's mask, and she was currently squirming away from him, looking up in terror. He stood in profile, so that the audience saw nothing unusual, but both Christine and the wing-bound cast had a clear look at what lied beneath the mask. Ron squinted and Harry, following his gaze, felt slightly ill at the sight of the Phantom’s horribly deformed face.

There was absolute silence from everyone as the Phantom roared, 'Damn you! You little prying Pandora!' He kneeled before Christine to give her a good look at his face. She retreated further, trembling from head to toe. Hermione and Harry had practiced this scene at great length.

'Damn you! Curse you!' The words echoed around Hermione, who now looked petrified with fear.

'You've fancied that?' Ron muttered absentmindedly.

What could Harry say to that? That there was a difference between the actor and the character? Ron already knew that. That was not what upset him.

'Can you even dare to look, or bear to think of me?' the Phantom began, now in a strangely subdued tone.

The silence between them stretched to an uncomfortable extent as Harry tried to figure what he could possibly say that was sufficiently effective to make Ron stop looking at him with such disappointment in the three minutes that Stranger Than You Dreamt It granted him before he had to run to the wing across from them.

'Fear can turn to love, you'll learn to see, to find the man behind the monster...'

Even in the dim light, Ron was visibly paling as the words reached them. Dean broke their silence. The length of rope in his hands twisted into a lasso, he brought their attention back to the performance by squeezing himself between them with a muttered 'Let me through, let me through.'

'Come, we must return, these two fools who run my theatre will be missing you,' the Phantom snapped, dragging Christine offstage. Harry tried to figure out where they had gone, but the stage was shifting again, and he had to jump out of its way. In the meantime, Ron had taken his leave, and Dean was already halfway through his song. Harry had to go.

'You must be always on your guard,' Dean said morbidly, exhibiting himself to the ballet girls. He slipped the rope around his neck and then his hand in between, pulling the rope taut without harming himself. 'Or he will catch you with his magical lasso!'

An open trap appeared centre-stage, and the Phantom emerged, holding Christine under his cloak and gazing at Buquet. The ballet girls fled in fear. The gloomy pair crossed the stage silently and left. McGonagall told Dean off for taunting the ghost. It was Harry's cue.

'Joseph Buquet, hold your tongue – he will burn you with the heat of his eyes…'

'Sad news on soprano scene,' Harry sighed, flipping nervously through the newspapers he carried. Seamus burst in, nervous to no end, and both had a hard time containing their laughter as they commented on the letters that the Phantom had sent them. For some reason, they had never quite managed to work on this scene without laughing.

'In addition, he wants money!'

'He’s a funny sort of spectre…'

'… to expect a large retainer!'

Prima Donna was an extremely long, ellaborate scene which required the presence of almost everyone -- except, ironically, for the people Harry most desperately wanted to meet. Pansy simply glowed. This was Carlotta's brightest moment, and Harry was bitterly reminded of the numerous rehearsals in which she steadfastly refused to work, whinging and snivelling that they weren't showing Carlotta the sort of slobbering submission she expected.

Harry added a silent 'Please, no,' to the booming 'Once more!' that signalled the end of the sequence, and the stage was set for a performance of Albrizzio’s Il Muto. Backstage, Hermione dressed as a boy to play Serafimo, Carlotta's lover in the show, and Parvati helped her adjust a maid's outfit over the many layers of fabric. Serafimo's liaison with the Countess must be hidden from her husband.

Pansy presented the audience with a spectacular cadenza that, apparently, only the Phantom disliked.

'Did I not instruct that Box Five was to be kept empty?' he roared above the music. Harry, Seamus and Malfoy, sitting in Box Five, stopped chortling and glared at the source of the voice.

'It’s him… I know it… it’s him…' Hermione said tremulously.

'Your part is silent, little toad!' Pansy hissed.

'A toad, Madame? Perhaps it is you who are the toad…' the Phantom retorted malevolently.

Pansy held her head high and turned to Hermione. 'Serafimo, away with this pretense, you cannot speak, but kiss me in my -- croak!'

There was stunned silence. She cleared her throat quietly and tried again, managing a set of croaks in several octaves. As she despairingly tried to utter 'in my husband’s absence' in her perfect soprano, the Phantom started to laugh. Just a snigger at first, then a resounding laugh that echoed along the walls.

'Behold! She’s singing to bring down the chandelier!' he jested cruelly, laughter booming above their heads.

'Non posso più… I cannot… I cannot go on…', Carlotta moaned pitifully, her words supported by the chandelier, which blinked and swayed ominously. Neville ushered her offstage. As soon as she set foot in the wings, Pansy complained that those rasping sounds had probably ruined her voice for good.

'Maestro – the ballet – now!' Seamus clipped out. The soft tune of the Dance of the Country Nymphs filled the stage. A bright light filtered through the backdrop, treating the audience to the Phantom's shadow, cast ominously over the dancers, closer and closer. As it filled the length of the backdrop, Ginny let out a blood-curling scream that made more than one audience member jump. The body of Joseph Buquet, garrotted by his own lasso, hung from the ceiling and fell onto the stage. A quiet flurry of cushioning charms flew in from the wings, to ensure that Dean wouldn't be hurt.

The sight of the dead body sent cast and audience into a panic, and provided Malfoy and Hermione with an excuse to run to the roof for All I Ask of You. It also allowed Harry to go gratefully back to Ron, who followed the events from the right wing. He nodded at Harry in acknowledgement. Harry waited, let him lead the conversation.

'Did you, huh… you know. Did you?' Ron looked like he couldn't believe his own words.

Harry thought for a moment and nodded. There was no reason to hide that from Ron now.

'Does Dumbledore know?' Ron snorted in response to his own question. 'Of course he does. He knows everything. What did he say?'

'He disapproves. And he’s sending him away.'

'He would.'

Harry didn’t like the hollow note in Ron’s voice. His quiet tone was more worrying than anything else. Ron was only quiet when he was ferociously angry.

'Who knew?' Ron then enquired. 'Other than Hermione and Dumbledore?'

'No-one,' Harry answered truthfully. Ron raised his brow doubtfully. 'People suspected, but no-one really knew.'

'Who suspected?

Harry thought for a moment. 'Ginny and Seamus, I suppose... and Malfoy, but he thought I was having a fling with Hermione. Blaise, too. Pansy definitely noticed something strange.' Listing the names felt a bit like stripping naked. Looking at it this way, his secret sounded very, very, public.

'That's... a lot of people.'

'Yeah... but no-one really knew anything,' Harry reminded him. 'Even Dumbledore was only informed, er, later on.'

'I never suspected,' Ron mused aloud. 'Not once.'

'Yes, you did,' Harry countered.

'That was only because I thought he was... he wasn't, was he?'

Harry shook his head negatively.

'I never suspected,' Ron repeated absently. 'I always thought we were good enough friends that you'd tell me if something as important as this happened to you.'

'We-- we are!'

Ron’s voice shook ever so slightly. 'But when you had to tell someone, you told Hermione.'

'You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you!' the Phantom bellowed from well above the stage. The chandelier fell, smashing just an inch from Hermione’s feet. Intermission.

Harry and Ron had to change, as well as help with the stage for Masquerade, so there was no more time to talk. But at least now Harry knew where he stood with Ron. He would try to reach him during Scene Four. Beforehand, good Merlin, he had to dance.

He and Seamus wore matching skeleton outfits and opera cloaks. 'M’sieur Firmin?'

'M’sieur André?' Seamus took off his mask and grinned. Around them, a sea of colourful fabric flooded the stage, celebrating six months without news of the Phantom. To the left, Raoul placed a gold chain with an engagement ring around Christine’s neck, though she was reluctant to accept it.

'Wait till the time is right…'

'When will that be? It’s an engagement, not a crime!' he pleaded.

She squirmed her way through an acceptance, and they joined the ensemble, dancing giddily to their happiness.

'Masquerade! Take your fill – let the spectacle astound you!' the crowd echoed.

A chilled silence fell when a figure dressed head to toe in crimson and wearing a death’s head as a mask appeared at the top of the staircase, descending frostily towards the ball guests, tossing the manuscript of Don Juan Triumphant at Seamus and beckoning Christine closer.

The Phantom jumped over the last steps, landed next to the directors, and walked towards Christine, his gloved hand brushing Harry’s for a second. Harry’s head jerked and he almost fell out of character at the only acknowledgement he had received from him all night, but the Phantom gazed coldly at him through the skull, and Harry refocused. He moved mechanically throughout the rest of the sequence.

Harry tapped his foot in impatience as Neville uselessly struggled to get 'Those who tangle with Don Juan' right, so that Ron could stop instructing him and return backstage. He had completely forgot that Ron was part of Scene Four.

Hermione walked past him in a flowing gown. Its silver embroidery translated the refrain of All I Ask of You into Ancient Runes. It had been Malfoy's idea, she told him. She walked solemnly upstage and entered a cemetery. The Phantom, Harry knew, lurked in the shadows.

'I was afraid,' he blurted out, as soon as Ron walked offstage. Ron, still musing over Reyer's lines, frowned incomprehendingly. 'I was afraid of your reaction.'

'Sure. Hermione's the mature one. I'd have told her instead of telling me, too,' Ron grumbled.

'I didn't mean to tell her -- or anyone. It just... happened. And we were both so worried that you might react badly--'

'That's the thing,' Ron said bitterly. 'Perhaps you didn't mean to tell her, but once you did, you chose to keep me in the dark. You didn't keep it to yourself -- you just kept it from me.'

'I was worried.' Harry gulped. 'I was worried that I might have to choose between you and him.'

Ron swore so loudly that McGonagall, sitting across from them, had a murderous glance around.

'You thought I'd make you choose?!'

Harry looked down as Ron's anger finally erupted. Nearby, Malfoy glowered at the noise they made.

'If that's what you think of me,' Ron finished, breathless with the effort to let out a record number of words in such little time, 'it's really no wonder you didn't want to tell me, isn't it?'

'Ron, I...'

'Of course I wouldn't react well! It's Snape, what did you think? Just last year, we were teasing each other about girls, trying to ask them out without making arses of ourselves, and now... did you think I was going to congratulate you?'

'No, that's why I didn't tell you!' Harry hissed. Silence fell. 'I'm sorry,' he eventually added.

'I wouldn't have made you choose,' Ron mumbled. 'I didn't like it when you dated the Chang sniffler, but I didn't make you choose between us. And if you'd actually told me you... liked... him... I wouldn't have made you choose, either. I'm not a complete idiot.'

'I'm sorry,' Harry repeated.

'Yeah,' Ron uttered, gazing back at the stage. 'You should be.'

'Try to forgive, teach me to live, give me the strength to try...' Hermione sang softly.

'Why do you like him?' Ron asked at last.

Harry froze. He hadn't really had the chance to wonder about that. It seemed to have just... happened. Somehow, though, he knew that saying that wouldn't give Ron the best impression.

'He's a good singer, I guess?' he answered tentatively.

Ron smirked. After a second, Harry grinned.

After making up with Ron, time flew by. Harry felt much lighter. Ron told him how the twins had come up with the fireballs that the Phantom was currently tossing at Raoul, and how they had prepared an extra stage for the climactic explosion while Harry was in the hospital wing. Harry's mind couldn't be further away from the machinery, but still he listened attentively to all that Ron had to say. Everything was always so much more fun when Ron was around.

The climax approached. The stage was set for the performance of the Phantom's opera. Ginny danced coquettishly for Neville's Don Juan. He threw her a coin purse before being whisked offstage and immediately replaced by the Phantom, who sang heartbreakingly of loneliness with Christine. When Hermione serenely raised her hand and whipped off his mask, showing his face plainly to the horrified audience, he wrapped her in his cloak and they vanishd. The rest of the cast waited with bated breath, for this was a tricky sequence.

Fire licked at the scenery, the spare stage that had been brought up turned to coal, and Neville's, Piangi's body was brought forth, garrotted in the same manner as Buquet, making Pansy burst into a bout of hysterics.

'You! Why did you let this happen?' she shouted at Seamus, as Neville was quietly carried away and Harry moaned their disgrace.

The stage shifted again, as Mme. Giry firmly told Meg that no, she couldn't accompany Raoul to the catacombs, where, as the audience could see, the Phantom had already arrived with a terrified Christine.

'Track down this murderer, he must be found!' a mob clamoured, 'Hunt down this animal, who runs to ground!'

Mme. Giry gave her last directions to Raoul, instructing him to keep his hand at the level of his eyes, and he made his way to the lair alone.

'Too long he’s preyed on us – but now we know, the Phantom of the Opera is there, deep down, below…'

Hermione looked at the Opera Ghost with an incomparable coldness. 'Have you gorged yourself at last in your lust for blood?' The Phantom remained silent. 'Am I now to be prey to your lust for flesh?'

'That fate, which condemns me to wallow in blood has also denied me the joys of the flesh…' he explained softly. 'This face – the infection that poisons our love…' He walked to a dummy dressed in a wedding gown and took its veil, shoving it into Hermione's hands. She listened to his self-pitying words unwaveringly.

'This haunted face holds no horror for me now… it’s in your soul that the true distortion lies…'

There was nary a sound from the audience when the Phantom realised that they had an unexpected guest. But there were gasps when the Phantom tied Raoul as though he meant to hang him. Hary and Ron couldn't avoid smiling. Never before had their Potions master mistreated his precious Draco.

'Angel of Music, when will you see reason…?' Christine muttered, as they went on and on about their love for her. 'Angel of Music…'

'You’ve passed the point of no return…' he assured her.

'You deceived me – I gave my mind blindly…' she finished sadly.

'You try my patience! Make your choice!' he snapped.

Hermione had the foresight of letting the words echo for a second before approaching him. Everybody's attention had to be on her actions rather than the lyrics.

'God give me courage to show you…' she sang as she approached him. 'You are not alone…'

Reaching him, she looked up, and he lowered his head. Backstage, and in spite of himself, Harry looked the other way. He had to focus on them again when he felt Ron pulling madly at his sleeve, and his chin dropped. They were kissing. Really kissing. Holding each other, their lips touching. Squinting, he thought he could see a bit of tongue. Even Malfoy looked shocked.

The silence when they broke apart was deathly. A second later, the chorus burst into song. 'Track down this murderer – he must be found! Hunt down this animal…'

Onstage, after a short deliberation, the Phantom released the two lovers, resigned to his unrequited passion. As they gratefully rushed to the boat, he looked at his mask and the music box started playing. He sang along melancholically, holding onto the ring that he had given Christine, and which she had given him back before leaving with Raoul.

The mob neared. He wrapped himself in his cloak and disappeared. How much work Flitwick had put into those disillusionment charms, they did not know, but they were certainly effective. When the rest of the cast burst into the Phantom's only home, they found only his mask. Ginny held it in the light, and the curtain fell.

A split second later, the audience stood, applauding heartily. The cast reappeared, led by the chorus and the extras.Harry and Seamus came out together, after Ron, and Pansy followed, receiving the loudest applause so far. Malfoy got catcalls and whistles on top of the clapping. Same for Hermione. At Parvati's signal, they stepped aside. The Phantom was walking downstage. He hadn't reversed the spell that deformed his face. The applause was sparse and reluctant. Hermione walked up to him and he bowed to kiss her hand.

As though it had been rehearsed, the crowd exploded in thunderous applause. Cast and crew held hands for the final bow. The Phantom stood in the middle, holding nobody's hand, with Hermione to his right and Malfoy to his left. As they approached, he took their hands and held them together, stepping back. When the crowd blinked, he was no longer there.

The applause redoubled and Ron quietly broke the line to pull Harry into the nearest wing.

'Hey, that’s my husband!' Lavender playfully piped in.

'Shut up, Lavender.' Ron turned to Harry in a whisper, 'He’s leaving, you said? Then you can’t waste time bowing to these people. Hurry up.'

'Hurry… no! Are you mad? I don’t want to go there!'

'Of course you do,' Ron countered, dragging him along the deserted corridor. 'Do you think I’m doing this because I like it?'

Onstage, after three curtain calls, Malfoy was ranting at Hermione for the kiss she had shared with his head of House.

'Professor Snape and I just though that we had to do something to match the show that the Bohemians put on.'

'And of course, kissing was the logical course of action.'

'It did cause a bit of a commotion, didn’t it?' She smiled sweetly holding his hand for a final bow, as the crowd began to stand.

Harry and Ron had already reached the dungeons.

'Ron, I don't even... how do we even know he's here?'

Ron banged on the door. 'Where'd he go dressed like that? Have a pint at The Three Broomsticks?'

They waited. There was no answer.

'Just to be clear, I don't agree with this,' Ron grumbled irritably.

A different matter flitted into Harry's mind. 'Who were you going to kill? It wasn’t me, was it?'

Ron froze, with his fist hand in the air. 'No-one...?'

'You were talking about it with Malfoy.'

Ron frowned, deep in thought. “Oh, right. We were... just talking about giving Nott a lesson.'

'Nott?'

Ron stared at him for a moment. 'Right, you were in the hospital wing when Dumbledore told us... it was Nott who tampered with Hermione's food. Dumbledore's made him follow her everywhere now, do her bidding, carry her stuff... like a personal valet. For the whole term! I love Dumbledore,' he finished brightly, banging on the door again. It flung open.

'Do you want to bring down my door, Weasley?'

'I have a Christmas gift for you,' Ron countered coldly. 'And I'll search him for injuries when he goes back upstairs, so you want to be careful,' he added, before turning on his heel and leaving them alone.

'You have a peculiar set of friends…' Severus uttered, gazing at the empty corridor. He had already changed out of the Phantom's costume.

'Yeah,' Harry replied. He stepped inside the familiar office quietly, not sure of what to say next.

Severus closed the door carelessly and turned to look at him. 'I take it he, too, already knows.'

'Yeah... but I didn't tell him--'

'It doesn't matter. It was a matter of time before Miss Granger told him, too.'

Harry stared at him, earnestly searching for words. Ultimately, he opted for, 'You were great.'

'You weren't,' Severus countered plainly. 'You were terrible.'

'No, I wasn't,' Harry replied with a small smile.

'No,' Severus quietly conceded. 'Not quite. But you already know that.'

'Yeah...'

'Then, why are you here?

Harry hesitated. 'Ron dragged me.'

'Why would he do that?'

'I suppose he was trying to be useful.'

'How useful?' Severus asked pointedly.

'May we go to your bedroom?' Harry blurted out.

'No.'

'I won't discuss this here as if we're talking about a school assignment!' Harry barked. He really had no ulterior motives. Seconds dripped by, and, to his surprise, Severus turned, leading him silently to his private quarters. Harry sat on the very edge of bed, taking a proper look around for the first time, as Severus warded the door heavily enough to keep even Peeves out. Not that he would have dared disturb one of the Bloody Baron's Slytherins in his own quarters.

It was a rather spartan room, much like its inhabitant. It was a far cry from Harry's own bright, noisy, happy dormitory. But that mattered very little. One of his most precious memories had taken place there. He looked down at Firmin's formal shoes, again searching for words.

'Before you speak, there is something I need to know.'

Harry looked up. He was always the one who asked questions. 'What is it?'

'Are these nightly visits of yours going to become a habit?'

Harry focused on his shoes again, his answer barely audible. 'And if they do?'

'Then I'll have to move to another room and make sure you don't know its location.'

A tense silence followed. Harry had hoped that they would eventually maintain a conversation that wasn't broken by these uncomfortable silences. It looked unlikely.

'You didn't want to have to see me when you came back,' he eventually retorted, echoing Severus' words of just a few days ago.

'How kind of you to remember.'

'Then why did you visit me in the hospital wing?'

'I'm going to rip out Miss Granger's tongue,' was the unfazed reply.

'Why did you touch me onstage?' Harry murmured. 'Why won't you make it easier for me and let me hate you?'

'Do you want me to?'

Harry looked up again. Severus' face was inscrutable. 'No,' he breathed out, countering his own request.

'Potter.' He gazed at Severus. He had always been Potter for him. Even now, he was Potter -- perhaps specially now. Harry was surprised to realise how little it mattered to him, how the developments had led him to a position where a snarled 'Potter' was an acceptable substitute for the name that defined him, his individuality and his worth. 'Potter.'

He jolted back to reality. 'Yes?'

Severus took one step towards him, but froze, as though wary of the teenager huddled on his bed. 'I haven't changed. You've known me for six years, you've loathed me for six years. I'm still that person. I don't even understand what prompted you to change--'

'You've never asked what I saw in you,' Harry cut him off. 'You just waited until I could see it.'

What a highly romanticised version of the events. Harry didn't know why his feelings had changed so dramatically, either, but contrary to everybody else, he couldn't be less invested in finding out why. Considering all doors were closing on him, introspection seemed to be a useless effort.

'You were right,' Harry said at last. 'I didn't know what I was asking for.'

Another of those unbearable silences followed.

'It couldn't have ended differently.'

'I-- I know where I stand with you,' Harry tried desperately, one last attempt. 'We could--'

'No. We couldn't.'

'It could work. I could control myself.'

'There's a tiny room adjacent to the Great Hall bearing witness to the fact that I don't always control myself.'

'I wouldn't mi--'

'I would.'

Harry resisted the urge to bury his head in his hands with great difficulty.

'I must go, now,' Severus reminded him.

'Let me stay,' Harry whispered. His head was heavy.

'Potter...'

'Just for a bit,' Harry muttered almost inaudibly.

'I really must go.'

'I won't be here again. Give me just a moment.'

Severus relented, heaving a deep sigh. Harry gazed vacantly at the walls for minutes on end. It was a good pretext to keep them in the same room for a bit longer. But they would eventually have to leave, and it would be irreversible...

'Would you do something else for me?'

'And then you'll leave?'

Harry hesitated for a tiny moment, but then he nodded.

'What is it?'

'Will you sing for me?'

Severus did a doubletake. 'That's a completely silly idea.'

'Nobody's ever sung for me.' It was the cheapest of blows, it reeked of a need beyond even that of which Severus had once accused him, but Harry knew that it was also his best argument. I fell for you when I heard you sing, was just too laughable to be voiced. 'And I'd like to hear you sing again. Just a few bars...'

'Sing what?' Severus rather looked like he couldn't believe his own words.

Harry's choice had been made months ago. 'Only then can you belong to me...' he intoned with a sad smile.

Severus seemed to be repressing a snort, but, eventually, the lowest of low voices reached Harry's ears. 'Don't be here when I come back.'

Harry nodded with his eyes closed, waiting for the next words, which, he was now sure, would come.

'Let the dream begin, let your darker side give in, to the power of the music...'

'... of the night,' Harry mouthed along. He opened his eyes. Severus had approached him. He kneeled before Harry, scanning his face for reactions. It had all begun this way -- with Severus kneeling concernedly beside him, his brow set and his wand drawn.

'Don't obliviate me,' Harry murmured.

Severus considered his wand and Harry's face for a moment. Then he hoisted himself up just a bit, just so could be at eye level with Harry. Harry closed his eyes, repressing a gulp.

There was a faint, yet lingering brush of lips against his forehead. Harry's eyes flew open again. A kiss. A chaste, tender kiss, unlike any that they had shared. Their parting kiss, at last.

Severus didn't look away as he raised his wand and whispered, 'Nox.'

'You alone can make my song take flight; it's over now, the music of the night...'

And their show, too, was now over.


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(Anonymous)
2007-10-04 05:30 am UTC (link)
PLEASE tell me there's more. Please please please please please! *puppy-dog eyes* Please? :D

You made me cry.

That was beautiful.

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[info]roman
2007-10-04 02:21 pm UTC (link)
... no more for now, sorry. :(

But I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Aw, you cried... thank you!

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-04 01:15 pm UTC (link)
Would it tell you how good you are at writing if I said I wept at the end of this? Or if I told you that I read your story in one sitting?

I do hope to read more stories by you in the future - I am sure they will be as good as this.

I have no words to describe this story, which seems dramatic, but please be content in the fact that it moved me so much, that it had so much character development, that I had begun to think that they were real.

Thank you for sharing this with us all; you have made my night.

- Fayt (this is my ij name if you wish to contact me... for whatever reason)

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[info]roman
2007-10-04 02:24 pm UTC (link)
In one sitting? Wow.

I'm really flattered that you were so moved. You've definitely made my *day* with your comment. Thank you.

... my LJ name is havocs_roman, and I'm friending you. Ha. :)

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[info]akuma_river
2007-10-04 03:47 pm UTC (link)
I knew from the first chapter what this story was, since I read it once before...

And yet for some masochistic reason I read the last chapters all over again from chapter 22 knowing exactly how things were going to end.

I hoping miraclously that I missed an extra chapter or it would have a sequel or something... But no.

Again you have broken my heart.

Why can't they have a happy ending damnit?! *cries*

I need happy Snarry porn...

Brilliant writing. Keep up the excellent work, coolsa.

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[info]roman
2007-10-05 12:18 am UTC (link)
Eep!! You read the first version, eep! *runs off in shame*

Thanks for the lovely review, I'm, er... glad?, that I broke you heart again.

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[info]emila_wan
2007-10-04 08:51 pm UTC (link)
Amazing, wonderful story! I, too, would love to see a sequel, or perhaps an Epilogue ... surely a passion as great as theirs wouldn't die so easily?

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[info]roman
2007-10-05 12:24 am UTC (link)
... but does Severus really love Harry? Hmm.

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

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[info]red_day_dawning
2007-10-04 11:59 pm UTC (link)
So sad - very moving *sobs*
*pathetic sniffles* Well done, you tied in the Phantom plot beautifully at the end there - very well-written, with a truly engaging story!

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[info]roman
2007-10-05 12:42 am UTC (link)
... that was quite the marathon for you, eh?

It's so, so good to know that you liked the ending. Thank you so much.

*is icon, it is mesmerising...*

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-05 02:14 am UTC (link)
I've read this before. Just a bit odd as you seem to be advertising it as a new story. You should consider writing new ones rather than editing and reposting old ones.

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[info]roman
2007-10-05 10:58 am UTC (link)
I never meant to advertise it as a new story.

This particular one was first written and posted in a couple of archives a few years ago, before the fandom virtually moved into LJ. The first version has been replaced with this one in those archives, with a note warning that it is a revised version.

I never got around to posting the first version in my journal, much less in IJ, and now that I finally had the time edit the whole thing, I thought I might. But you're right, I should make it clear, for those of you who might have stumbled upon it before, that this isn't new. Thanks for dropping me a word about it.

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[info]juniperus
2007-10-05 08:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh my. I'm so glad I read this, it was a wonderful piece - but I am so sad now. Gaaaah.

Thank you.

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[info]roman
2007-10-06 11:22 am UTC (link)
*handing hankie* Thank you...? I'm glad you liked/were saddened by it. ;)

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[info]juniperus
2007-10-12 02:19 pm UTC (link)
ROFL. I'm a head case.
Wonderful bit of writing, it has to be so to suck me in like that! :D

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[info]roman
2007-10-15 01:46 pm UTC (link)
Aww, yay. I have a love/hate relationship with angst, too. Love to read it, hate that it doesn't get any happier with time.

Let's be head cases together, lol.

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[info]hogwartshoney
2007-10-07 12:19 am UTC (link)
*weeps like an utter arse*

OMG... I've seen the Phantom on stage and it was wonderful being able to visualize all the Hogwarts participants in their version of it! That last scene of Severus and Harry in the bedroom.... that really gutted me. I hoped and hoped, y'know... as we do, that somehow something could have happened to change the awful finality ... just gut-wrenching. *sniffles*

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[info]roman
2007-10-08 04:21 pm UTC (link)
Aww. I'm... glad. *hides* So nice of you to take the time to review so many chapters. Thank you. :)

Seeing Phantom onstage really is something else, isn't it?

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[info]hogwartshoney
2007-10-08 05:12 pm UTC (link)
OMG yes!!! [info]charmed310 and I saw it in Ft Lauderdale, and even though we were far away in the nosebleed seats, the impact was still huge!

I truly enjoyed this fic and it brought back so many memories, and the angst was, well, really really good! At least he didn't Obliviate Harry.. 'cause that would have cheapened the entire thing somehow! (imo, of course)

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[info]roman
2007-10-15 01:44 pm UTC (link)
I saw it a few years ago, at Her Majesty's, and John Owen-Jones should be a candidate for God Reigning Deity of the Moment, he really should. I'm really sorry I don't remember the name of that night's Christine (she was the understudy), because she was really moving. Mme. Giry was memorable. Have no idea who she was, either. :(

Nosebleed seats for the win!

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[info]lyssador
2007-10-08 07:56 pm UTC (link)

Agh, I can't believe I read this thing all the way through again even though I knew it was going to make me cry because I bawled like a baby the last time I read it! Still a very lovely and poignant story, though. But it's heart-wrenching, it really is!

(And now you're going to write a sequel, right? Where Severus and Harry love each other so much that the power of their love destroys Voldemort and they can live happily ever after with Snape singing to Harry until the end of time? Right?)

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[info]roman
2007-10-12 01:56 pm UTC (link)
No... sequel... yet. *hides*

... at least the writing is better this time around, isn't it? :D

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-11 06:06 pm UTC (link)
I just have to say this. That was beautiful, I laughed, I cryed, it moved me, Bob. But the end was just so.... horrible. It made me really really sad, and it made me kinda despressed at work today.
So...
Please, please, PLEASE, at least consider a sequel. If for nothing else than to make sure an innocent slash reader doesn't go pre-maturely insane.
PLEEEEEEEEASE!!!!

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-12 12:28 pm UTC (link)
Yeah! I totally agree! It could be something like how they went to the school in France & Durmstrang and preformed there and how Snape and McGonagal were the supervisers... I don't know, you're the writer not me. But I'm sure it'd still be cool if you didn't. I loved the whole thing, by the way.

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[info]roman
2007-10-12 02:00 pm UTC (link)
I would kill to see Snape teaching the lovely ladies of Beauxbattons, particularly as depicted in the GoF movie. HeeHEE!!

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[info]roman
2007-10-12 01:58 pm UTC (link)
... I didn't mean to make you depressed at work. Work can be depressing enough on its own. Sorry. :(

Would a shamelessly gratuituous sex scene help your prematurely insane mind? Because I am working on one, not a particularly cheery one, mind you, but... well, gratuituous sex can never hurt. I think.

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-12 08:09 pm UTC (link)
Roman,

I wish to tell you about my experience of this story. At first, I was struck by the brilliance of the premise - Slytherins and Griffindors forced to cooperate, and the fact that they were putting up a play. It was all busy, crowded, awkward, and immature. It felt like it was written by a young person, whose talent nevertheless showed through, so I read on. I had some skepticism about the value of the story, but it was fun and it drew me in, completely, so I read on. And I enjoyed it, I did, very much so, but I didn't expect to be amazed, and I didn't expect to experience anything deep or profound; nevertheless, since I had started it, I couldn't very well leave it until I found out how it all ends. Then there came that chapter 14. The turning point. I was quite amazed at the truthfulness and depth of a simple description of how Harry feels about Sirius' death. I was moved, deeply, and I gained a far deeper understanding or insight into Harry's feelings regarding that loss than I had when reading the actual books by JKR. Maybe her Harry didn't really experience it that way, but now I think he definitely should have. Also, another turning point in that chapter 14 was that suddenly, we see things from an adult's perspective. Everything before was from the 16-year olds' perspective, and now we are suddenly entering a grown up world. Except, it is them - the 16-year olds - that are entering that world slowly. After that we see all throughout the remaining chapters how all these kids are changing and maturing. The characters have truly grown in some measures from the start of the story; it has been only couple of months for them, but that time was filled with powerful experiences that slowly changed them. And to see that happening in the story, whether that was your intention or not, was very impressive. I gained a far deeper admiration for the author. It was also wonderful to experience the actual performance of the plays and, as someone has already said, the blending of the Phantom's theme with your story. And then, finally, there is the ending. I didn't like it at all! :-) Well, what can I say, I don't like to feel sad and depressed, I like to get those warm and fuzzy feelings of happiness from a story. But, even though I tried to hate it for a few minutes, I couldn't really. It fits, the ending fits, and it gave me a lingering "profound" feeling. It left me unpleasantly stirred up, and yet, pleasantly thoughtful. I couldn't help but think how Harry's character will mature so much more still, after that experience. The only thing that could have made this story still greater is to have revealed some more insight into Severus, maybe at the end at last, maybe only a hint of something to give us some idea as to how will he change after all this. But that is not a deficiency of the story, because it was not about Snape, but about Harry and the other sixth years, and the only reason I wanted to get more insight into Snape is because I am a fan of Snape. :-) Another thing I wanted to say is that throughout your whole story, there was some amazing detail strewn throughout and some really good sentences. So overall, very good job Roman, I loved this story (even if I only grudgingly admit the story's ending into that statement). I sincerely hope that my review does *not* read like criticism - that would kill me, if it does! I wanted to express a true admiration for your story, your theme, your premise, your characterization, your characters, your ability to draw in and keep interest at a high the entire time, your marvelous ideas for some details that enriched the story so much! And for the fact that your characters changed and grew - something I can't say I remember reading in fan fiction. As for the unhappy ending...oh well, I grudgingly accept that it is good...in it's way...

Melissa

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[info]roman
2007-10-15 02:01 pm UTC (link)
Wow. Such a thorough review, and I can't even reply properly because I don't think anonymous reviewers are notified of replies...

Thank you so much for taking the time to let me know how you felt about the fic. Can't tell you how pleased I am that Chapter 14 resonated with you. I did intend for the characters to experience some sort of personal growth throughout the fic (if nothing else because Harry would never take to Snape if his approach to life didn't shift just a bit), so I'm glad that message got through.

I'm a bit surprised that you didn't notice any change in Snape's own approach, though. That's interesting (I didn't do my job right, damn!), I'll have to keep it in mind for any future fics.

About the ending... the fic had a happy ending for about a week, since the moment I first cooked up the premise to the moment I actually realised that my planned four-to-five-chaptered piece of fluff wasn't quite the way this one was going. I was tempted, more than once, but I just don't think it'd work (HBP and DH, anyone?). :(

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(Anonymous)
2007-10-27 06:35 pm UTC (link)
Nooooo! Noooooo! *sniff* I can't believe that the end is so sad. I really love this story. It is fantastically written and one of the best stories I have recently read. However, and I am sorry about that, but I hate the end. I saw it coming, nevertheless, I had to finish the story and nearly started crying and screaming when I read the ending.
I am really looking forward to read more from you with hopefully happy endings. :-) Keep up the great work!
Take care,
Kyreen (sorry, my comment is anonymous, because I only have a lj account).

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[info]roman
2007-10-28 08:26 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, the ending hasn't been getting much love at all. Wonder why. *whistles*

I fear this fic has exhausted my capacity for writing PLOT, though. Hope you like PWPs. *hides*

Thanks for reviewing!

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I'm an impatient wench
[info]introspect007.livejournal.com
2007-11-04 04:08 am UTC (link)
Ok, so I'm way too impatient to wait for all the chapters to post over on petulant poetess (though I will take my hard copies from there because they print very nicely)...so I popped over here and read it all in one sitting.

I just have to say Roman, this fic is even more incredible than I remembered. It is so tastefully and artfully done, it gives me chills. And by the end, it continues to leave me feeling like someone has scraped out my insides and left me all raw and empty. I LOVE this fic...it has to be my absolute favorite ever. Have I mentioned I'm a bit of a pain freak anyways? I think I'm going to reread it again here before I have to go back to work on Monday just for the raw emotions of it all again.

I'm so happy I stumbled across this again, Roman, it really made my month! Congrats on a truly heartbreaking fic.

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[info]roman
2007-11-13 08:44 pm UTC (link)
It's definitely a relief to hear that the fic doesn't feel too outdated--particularly coming from you, who were there for the first version. I'm so happy you still like it it's so much better now, isn't it?. So, so glad you like the ending. I can see why people don't, but in my mind, it really couldn't have happened any other way, and now, at least, I feel I've made a bit of justice to how I'd pictured it.

There are still a few plot points I wish I'd written differently--but there will be no more changes to this one. I have to take the good with the bad and hope for the best. :)

I think, in general, sad endings tend to stick with us more, though, even in otherwise not-so-remarkable stories. I notice it a lot with movies. Surely great hits like Gone with the Wind, Casablanca, Titanic would still have been huge without the bitter/bittersweet endings, but would they have stood the test of time (... well, the jury's still out on Titanic) if we, the viewers, left the theatre knowing that after all the drama, the heroes had been rewarded with happiness? It's so much easier to keep relating to them (in a masochist way) if they aren't...

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[info]introspect007.livejournal.com
2007-11-04 04:13 am UTC (link)
And I just have to mention that contrary to common consensus, I LOVE the ending of this fic, too. It just wouldn't have the impact without it, and honestly, I probably would have stuck with you through the original writing and posting (and had a glorious time with it) but then it would have sifted through the cracks like the literally thousands of other fics I've read in the last 5 years or so. JUST SAY NO TO HAPPILY EVER AFTER! (It never happens in r/l anyways)

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Re: Amend to review (or is it a post script?)
(Anonymous)
2008-04-18 02:44 pm UTC (link)
i love happy endings. we can all dream right? what's the point of fantasy if it can't incorporate what we want most?
It was an amazing story though, and the impact is huge. I feel gutted though - like my heart has been yanked out and kicked around (how sad).
It's the kind of fic you really want to work out well, but know inside they are doomed from the beginning - just like in POTO, which is a really great parallel of stories, by the way.
And maybe it was just me, but i spent the whole time thinking of Snape having Gerard Butler's voice in the 2004 movie.
:D

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[info]lishel_fracrium
2007-12-21 12:02 pm UTC (link)
oh wow. *applauds*

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(Anonymous)
2008-01-04 08:28 pm UTC (link)
I, like many others, have read this in one sitting, and am simply amazed. I love the Phantom of the Opera, but you made me take a new look at it, which is a wonderful thing. I was up and down during this fic so many time, but it's a great kind of roller coaster ride. You're a wonderful author, and I'm so glad that I read this! Thanks for writing such a spectacular piece.

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(Anonymous)
2008-04-18 02:39 pm UTC (link)
you are SO mean!

i was really enjoying it! and then it all crashes and burns! :(

I should have guessed when Snape became the phantom. it never works out for the phantom. :(

gahhh!!

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Just_plain
(Anonymous)
2008-10-12 10:49 am UTC (link)
*sighs happily*....This fic was just my type of fic! It had everything...hmm...except the happy ending...I didn't like that...but hey...I'm the sappy type....actually it's a lovely ending...but I want mooore! It just can't end there!? *cries* A sequel please?

I think I just might fall in love with you cause you wrote such a wonderful fic....but then I might just dislike you a tiny bit for stopping there....

But mostly love :P

Thank you for reccing me this terrific fic of yours!

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[info]effie_chan
2009-01-24 06:19 pm UTC (link)
I thought I should just let you know that I am terribly cross with you for making me sad. *pouts* I really hope there is going to be a sequel.

I remember reading this years ago on adultfanfiction.net and thinking that while the plot is engaging the grammar and writing style is definitely not. I'm truly amazed at this new and improved version. (Though, if you ever have extra time on your hands you might want to go back to all those past tense "to lie"s. It's lie, lay, lain... "lie" as in "lie, lied, lied" means to tell a falsehood.)

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[info]e_witness
2009-09-05 05:37 am UTC (link)
Imagine my glee when I discovered that the authoress of that astonishing Godric/Eric story had also written for my HP OTP? I hopped right over from LJ.

I think your writing style in "The Child" spoiled me for this story. Nonetheless, this is a hugely tragic, hugely moving epic. Ambitious, I thought it, to tackle Moulin Rouge or The Phantom of the Opera in fanfiction (much less both of them at once!), but you craft a romance and a tragedy so deftly, so powerfully that every bit of it lives up to those classics. I didn't even realize I was crying until I'd reached the end.

In your reply to one of the comments, you asked, to my delight, "Does Snape really love Harry?" If I were forced to provide an answer to myself, I'd say, Yes, he does love Harry here, without the abandon that comes so naturally to Harry but in his own way. But your question, I think, stands better without an answer.

Thank you for another beautiful, beautiful story. :)

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[info]roman
2009-09-06 01:08 am UTC (link)
>>I think your writing style in "The Child" spoiled me for this story.

Oh, God, don't know whether to clap or cry.

Thank you so, so, so much for the sweet, kind review. Glad/Sorry that you cried...

Originally, there was going to be something more explicit with regards to the "Does he or does he not" matter, but in the end I couldn't bring myself to write it. Considering the events in DH (the fic was written well before it, but revised afterwards), I think I like it in its ambiguity, too.

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